On Second Thoughts

I'm going to revise my review of The Witness by Nora Roberts.  I've decided that the beginning is great, but the next section seems to me to be falling into all the stilted description and trite story line I was impressed not to see in the first part.  Oh well, it's still mostly a good read - Romantic Suspense, apparently.  Not sure if I'll bother to finish it, though.  It's not really gripping me any more.  But, hey, that's just my opinion.  Make up your own mind.